Aw Darn

When Straub said that it's not a good idea to be short and sweet I could hear myself saying "Aw darn". I personally am one to be short and sweet when it comes to reviewing things, but when I have to go into detail and stuff like that, I can come up with things to talk about. I like how Straub went into detail about comments and what they should be like, how they should be presented and where they should be. Personally, I wouldn't know all this stuff if I hadn't read it. I mean, I probably would have done some of them, just because they make sense, but for some of them I don't think I would have ever thought of them. I probably would leave out a whole bunch of stuff like how I understood the writing and what I got from it, and it probably would be really short and not really specific. I probably would focus more on grammatical corrections, because I do that. Now I know more about responding to my classmates' writing so that they can have relevant infor! mation concerning their papers so that they can make it better.